All Comments on 'Lonely Girls'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Not bad but personally I had trouble keeping the .

characters straight. A little more clarity next time please

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Beautiful story

Really enjoyed your story. I hope you will write more.

hammer17hammer17over 17 years ago
WOW!!!

A very, very hot story, PLEASE continue with it. Thanks,

Paul

plumberdonplumberdonover 7 years ago
Nice

It's nice to get over being lonely when you can find this kind of fun. Well done now tell us more. Loved it-Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

No seduction. Like boiling an ounce of saltwater. Too fast.

Anonymous
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