All Comments on 'Lonely Hearts Club'

loved the idea of the story and how you put it together

Nice first story. Looking forward to much more about your fantasies.

Loved how the story was so well written I could clearly imagine the public display of out of control arousal. God, you made me horny.

Love how the story was so well written that I could clearly imagine the public display of out of control arousal in Annie. God, it mad me horny.

Well told & truly an inspirational tale loved it

I think the only negative is the speed of the piece and the way the girl went for it.

good story cant wait for more like it from a good tale teller

Well done. A beautiful young lady in my office came to work wearing eyeglasses a week ago. Several offered compliments on her new eyewear. As we exited her office she asked, “Do I look like a sexy librarian?” The ladies in the office laughed. I stepped back into her office a declared, “Yes, you do!!”. She smiled and I felt a stir. Your username reminded me of that exchange and your story caused another stir. An outstanding first effort. More, please.

I will look forward to your next story.

well executed. Perhaps a little more detail to slow it just a little and build the suspense, but overall great

fantastic the way you transformed a shy woman into a sex hungry slut

So very well told. Look forward to more.

Short. Direct. Great job. :)

Later when they fuck chris needs to fill annies cunt with cum

Well, it appears Chris and Annie won't need to attend the Lonely Hearts Club anymore. Now that they've experienced sex together, I'm thinking there needs to be a sequel to this hot story.

Good luck in the contest.

Great story with lots of passion, emotion and detail. Looking forward to your next!

Thanks for all the feedback! Fantasies sound great in my head, but that doesn't always translate. Please stay tuned for more ;)

Dear Librarian887: you claim this is your very 1st submission to Literotica.com? Well, I think you must have submitted stories to a bunch of other sites, because otherwise it's like beginner's luck, as you have crested a 5***** winner right out of the box! Kudos to you my dear for your forthright imagination; that is, if this truly is drawn from your imagination and not from real-life experiences! (Wink wink, say no more!)

Hottest short piece ever written! Hope you’re going to write again soon.

Wonderfully hot story with a touch of romance. Hope to read more of your work.

Your tenative approach at the start built beautifully into an extremely hot scenario. Excellent mental process and writing skills shown in this wonderful fantasy. Please indulge your imagination onto pixels readers can fully enjoy even further. You have a delightful gift of creativity.