All Comments on 'Long Blonde Hair, Sky Blue Eyes Pt. 02'

Lovely. It reads increasingly like a family saga and that is not a criticism. The family members are nicely drawn (some in more detail, of course) and the tensions are already clear. Big decisions on the horizon for us to look forward to.

Well done and thank you

Loving this story, thanks for sharing.

Great chapter!

5

I hope I don't too old before Part 3 is published

A marathon and I enjoyed every page! The South Pacific cavorting was a bit unsettling (well done!) but all's well as we end this chapter. I see Part 3 is already published so on we go! Getting a bit behind with my other authors! Lucky me!

Cheers

SAGE

I'm turning Part 4 in today, so keep your fingers crossed. I guess my junior high principal was right: I don't read details or follow rules well.

Good story. You must have done some traveling in Michigan to get that detailed. From age 10 through college I lived in Mi. . I have been literally to all the places you mentioned including the canoe trip on the Platte. Very enjoyable.

Great story so far and I'm looking forward tonpart three.

Ssa

I have to say that in a very short time you have quickly carved out a spot on my faves list.

The resolution of the "compromising situation“ was ok, but for my liking an additional, clarifying conversation in private between Annika and Erik is missing - the leap in the story was just too abrupt for me.

Nevertheless, a great story, superbly told - I'm really looking forward to the sequel(s)!

Because of the limitation mentioned above "only" 4/5 stars !

Very enjoyable. As someone said, the only thing missing was a clarifying conversation between Erik and Annika. 5⛤