All Comments on 'Long Blonde Hair, Sky Blue Eyes'

Wonderful story and the writing is very good, flows well!

Very well written. Love the setting and local color.

5 stars

Excellent story Texican, excellent as usual! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

This is so far from your usual (and Texas), but it is a truly terrific tale. I eagerly await part 2 and hope it is up tomorrow. 5 stars

All things considered, probably your most complete work to date - 5.0*

Very well written and eminently enjoyable. I look for forward to what follows. Good detail and storyline.

I’m not sure how long you intend it to be but hope for a bit more character development of the primary male MC.

Uf Dah! As they say up there. This really is an excellent start. A strong Five Stars.

Outstanding story and writing. Thank you for sharing your talent I'm looking forward to the next episode.

Cheers

SAGE

So well written. I'm no expert on the Swedish community in America or the Great Lakes but to my mind you certainly brought them and their family ethics out. Beautiful.

Great Story. Erotic, teasing, hopeful and maybe a perfect Romance.

Thank you Texican1830 Long live the Republic!

Excellent story. Erik is afraid of being hurt, but doesn’t grasp how deeply Annika is into him. Looking forward to p2.

Don't know what happened to my comment this morning, it was there but now isn't? Forgot to add that I loved Mrs Olson 's comment "You, on the other hand, are in deep caca, Erik." And don't we know it. Beautifully written and a pleasure to read. 5⛤

Took too long to get nowhere. The violence was off putting as well.

Part 1 is posted and read. Waiting impatiently for part 2 ? That was a for sure.

Needs some editing still, lots of spelling and grammatical mistakes, but overall, a very nice story. 5*

I really enjoyed this story. How many parts are there? Hope to see some tension in the following parts. Looking forward to part 2, 5*

Beautiful story.

"Existential threat" has me worried. I'm hoping the romance wins the day.

Unless there's some 'sweet home Alabama' goin on here, this should be 'Farmor' and 'Farfar', her grandparents on her father's side.

What you wrote is grandmother on mother's side and grandfather on father's side :)

Getting tired of romance stories with over endowed main characters. So, definitely pure fiction. I predict one of them will cheat within 2-3 years of marriage and you can then write the LW story. Still, worth 4*

Nice start.

This is a good story, but I have an issue with the posting. There are hundreds, if not thousands of unfinished stories on this site, some with more than twenty chapters. I am sure every one of those authors had good intentions toward finishing their story, but alas life sometimes gets in the way. Because of this, I never read a story unless it's complete. In my opinion, an author should post their story as a part 1, 2, etc., then eventually, a final. Using "The End" is also a nice touch. Again, just my opinion!

Anon, please note Part 1 before the story begins. As to posting other parts, as an author I’ve had three seconds parts posted before the first, due to having part one kicked back. That happened twice with this story - both times due to my negligence. So, I don’t post the next part until the previous part is published, and it takes the site editors a few days to do their work prior to publication. Part two has been posted for several days, and is still “pending”. Part three is in final edit, and will be posted after two is published. See how it works?

There will be a conclusion to this part of the story, but like The Summer of … series, there will be room for a continuation somewhere down the road, after the characters rest a bit.

Anon re Swedish incest: oops!

Little different. So far from ur other stuff bit still well written n enjoyable. Thanks for ur time n hard work it was enjoyed n appreciated

Exciting beginning!

5

Part 2 was posted for review on 9/25; Part 3 is ready to post.

Thanks for the story, as usual from you it's very well written.

Maybe one day you could make your hero an underweight, asthmatic under achiever with crooked teeth. Perfection can be a little dull.

Justeen, you read my mind. Fantasy depends on bigger than life, and most of us don’t want too much “normal” in our fantasy life. I’m working on one with an “average couple” who find themselves in over their heads.

Love your story telling, it brings the reader along the journey and makes them care about what happens.

Great story. Looking forward to part 2. Thanks.

Great story. I've been looking for part 2. I saw where you said it was posted to the site on 9/25. It is now 10/2, and Literotica is still sitting on it! What did they do, delete it instead of reading it?

No change in status of part 2; still shows the date submitted (9/25) meaning it hasn’t been reviewed.

I get up every morning, hoping, only to be disappointed….no part 2!

Anon - I check My Works - Pending several times a day, but not chapter 2 and three still show the date posted, so 2 is not scheduled for publication yet. ?

Why is part 2 taking so long to process?

Hi Texican, thanks for your reply. I'm already looking forward to it.

Here in the UK a tale based on everyday realism was often called a "kitchen sink drama"

I think you could handle one of those admirably.

I wasn't sure what to expect in the Romance tale from you. I have always enjoyed consuming your creations. They have always been intriguing, building imagery that is vivid and all consuming of my thought processes.

My worries were totally unfounded. This first in the series was beautifully told and created the same extraordinary imagery. I would place this along side any of your greatest creations series such as Betrayal and It Ain't Paranoia if.

This one while long by my reading standards (3 to 5 pages) was a great read and earned the Outstanding Read ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ rating I gave it.

I am looking forward to consuming the remaining products you have created in this series. Thank you for creating these tales for our consumption.

Keep Writing

JH4Fun

A well written story, good character development, credible conversations, good work!!!

All I can say is, "yummy!"

Remarkable writing as usual. I love the way you build your characters and the storyline.