All Comments on 'Long Haul Ch. 03'

Oh, wow. I’m so loving this series. So it’s going to be four parts? I’ll make a counter proposal, what if you just keep writing these, and I’ll keep reading, until we both die of old age? This is absolutely brilliant.

I laughed at the thirty same t-shirts (and the never ending cereal). How come it’s a touch of genius, when Steve Jobs only wears (ok, wore) the same exact clothes, but lazy and weird when someone else does? We’ve got this saying in Finnish, that translates (very) roughly to “gummy bears just don’t divide evenly”, maybe that’s why.

Anyway. Marvelous chapter, can’t wait for the next one. Thank you.

Freaking loved it. I've been a huge fan of these from the start and love the way these two get along. Don't ever stop.

I fell onto you story and now have fallen in love with it. Please continue this saga. 5 stars for all three chapters.

Sex scenes aside, this is just a fantastic sci-fi STORY. I’m captivated! I want to read more about this universe, hear more tales from this world that you’ve built.

As for the sex scenes, I am really digging your exploration of Wren’s psychic damage from the lingering fallout from her childhood injury. Exploring a character’s flaws, motivations, and quirks is a sure-fire recipe to keep this girl on the hook, and believe me, I’m hooked.

Do you think you'll ever add to this? Do you ever turn it over in your mind, future scenes? If not, then there's one answer, but if so, might you? Thanks for sharing. 😘😘😘

You just keep elevating your pedestal, don’t you? I love this story and these characters. Fighting back against injustice will always have a place in my soul. And I cannot say enough about Wren! Her uniqueness and quirks and mannerisms are so damn good. If we weren’t already tied together in the BSU, I’d wife you up for this masterpiece.

Smile ….. you are writing about what humans are searching for on earth, this peaceful independence, this place to be for eternity without the hassles working or paying taxes or neighbors ….. a garden ship a energy collector and a cosy place ro live, done ….. wren’s dream place and with bonnie she is having a perfect add …… extraordinary adventures and extraordinary written tale just magnificent

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