by Thrognar
My 2 cents
A good story. To hell with Janice, I would concentrate on the aunt. Thanks for your time and your imagination.
I liked it a lot. Thanks for the story. If you continue this, as I hope you will, I'm sure you have your own ideas {since I can write I shouldn't presume to advise you - but here goes anyway ;) ] maybe he brings Janice over to Aunt Sally's house and Aunt Sally teaches both of them? But, whatever you write, I'm sure to enjoy it. :)
Loved it, well written and kept going. Would love to see what happens next. Threesome with Sally and Janice?
Would like another chapter where sister turns up and where he and girlfriend graduates college.
I hope you write part two to this story and the long lost sister turn's up and join in as well.
3 stars, but a good story otherwise.
Frist story of yours I read 5 Starz. A part 2 with his sister return would be great
Doesn’t seem like this story should end? Seen it happen in real life, maybe Sally gets pregnant? Does Janice find out? Do they move away and start as a couple? Tons for alternate story arcs. 5*
1. Anti-depressants aren't habit forming. (Anxiety medications can be.)
2. Being unable to have offspring would be a legitimate reason for a divorce and would not result in, "being taken to the cleaners."
It wasn't too bad a story, albeit a bit formula. I didn't understand how Danny could be so casual about cheating on his "girlfriend". He behaved more like pretending he didn't ever have intimate relations with, before lusty auntie. Would have been more realistic to have Danny continue to explore and develop sexually with his mate, with auntie's guidance, of course.
Hot damn story!! Loved it. But a 45 year old CAN get pregnant. I know of some of my relatives who got pregnant at 50. So you could have continued the story with Aunt Sally getting pregnant. She could have put out that she had a one night stand resulting in her pregnancy.