All Comments on 'Long Trip to the Cabin'

It is great loved the build up to a great ending

Brilliantly written story, would love to read the sequel.

This is the second time I read this story and it is EVEN BETTER!!!!

I look forward for retreading the last two episodes.

OMG,One among the most beautiful sex relation between a sister and her brother !The story is so well written, The desire since he saw his sister's pussy ,goes crescendo,and same for the sister. .I jacked my cock very hard thinking about my own sister..about her awesome body. .about her thick pussy hairs. .about her beautiful boobs and their long tits. Her pair of asses is illegible to win.a GOLDEN GLOBE!!! A body which I know very well, because I had peeped at her several times when she was in the bathroom, undressing,very often caressing her tits and her pussy, I came twice after reading this story three times .I hope that my dream to fuck my sister will become true..as I have now started to let her see that I look at her from head to toe ..I have even licked her wet dirty panties and change the original places where these panties were.,,

Beautiful !

OMG Amazing, would love to read a sewuel

OMFG this is just faqing beautiful!!!

Big thanks for the sequel.

I have to agree with the other comments made. This is a beautiful love story. Thank you for writing it. I too look forward to reading the next part. ;-p

i just hope you keep wrighting I like everything you do keep up the great work.

Very good. Please continue. Excellent work of art.

Without a doubt, this has been the best story I have ever had the pleasure of reading! Completely absorbed with heart pounding the whole ride.

Geezus, that was crazy sexy! More! More! Lol but seriously well done 👍👍

Outstanding So much love Loved it

Too too good. The best story I've ever read so far. Lovely. BTW I'm still having a raging hard on

OK premise.

But sex is soooooo lacking in details.

She sucks his cock, for example. Fine. Details? What does he say? What does she ask?

Three stars.

Beautiful, hot, romantic story. Thank you for sharing your gift.

I do not often offer comment as the stories seem to stand on their own, however this one seems to have captured my imagination. Well done!!