All Comments on 'Long Trip to the Cabin'

by MrIllusion

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Beautiful story of love

All brothers and sisters should experience such uninhibited love.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Natural progression of events

I really liked how the dynamics between them changed - it was like something that could actually happen. VERY good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Hope to be able to read the next chapter soon.o

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More

I've read some real good stories here but this one was awesome. More please

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Hot, and realistic.

Hot, and realistic.

horny2doithorny2doitover 6 years ago

Yes, please write more! I have read many many stories on this board and others and find this story to be one of the hottest! There is so much potential here and you have started a new relationship with a virgin sister and brother. They have just given each other their virginity and started a new chapter in their relationship and life. Now, you can continue creating their roles, emotions, develop their sexual attitudes and see how HOT this can get. I certainly cannot wait for more, thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Amazing story !! Please continue.

That was the best brother/sister story I have read on here...and I have read a lot. Great buildup and the sex was so well described. Well done !!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Yes, yes, yes!

Definitely need to continue......I am still shakig with sexual shudders from what I've already read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wonderful Story

Enjoyed the story and the writing. Your story was vivid. Please consider another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Excelent start

You cant leave us hanging

We/I need this to continue and their love to deepen

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great

Great story please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

a great story hope to read more, really enjoyed it...

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I loved the story please continue it , I will look forward to the next post . Thank you for such a good read .

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good read

This was a great story loved all of it ... sequel may spoil it but try anyway

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
great

Loved it Hope you write more

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Sweet Surrender...

When accidents turn to opportunity, great stories are born. This was both innocent and wicked in the best of ways. Well done and yes, a sequel, though not necessary, would be appreciated. One caution, keep the future sex scenes but focus more on the maturation of two young adults as they move from childhood into the mysterious world of sensual delights.

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