by MrIllusion
All brothers and sisters should experience such uninhibited love.
I really liked how the dynamics between them changed - it was like something that could actually happen. VERY good story.
I've read some real good stories here but this one was awesome. More please
Yes, please write more! I have read many many stories on this board and others and find this story to be one of the hottest! There is so much potential here and you have started a new relationship with a virgin sister and brother. They have just given each other their virginity and started a new chapter in their relationship and life. Now, you can continue creating their roles, emotions, develop their sexual attitudes and see how HOT this can get. I certainly cannot wait for more, thank you.
That was the best brother/sister story I have read on here...and I have read a lot. Great buildup and the sex was so well described. Well done !!!
Definitely need to continue......I am still shakig with sexual shudders from what I've already read.
Enjoyed the story and the writing. Your story was vivid. Please consider another chapter.
You cant leave us hanging
We/I need this to continue and their love to deepen
I loved the story please continue it , I will look forward to the next post . Thank you for such a good read .
This was a great story loved all of it ... sequel may spoil it but try anyway
When accidents turn to opportunity, great stories are born. This was both innocent and wicked in the best of ways. Well done and yes, a sequel, though not necessary, would be appreciated. One caution, keep the future sex scenes but focus more on the maturation of two young adults as they move from childhood into the mysterious world of sensual delights.