All Comments on 'Longing for Chelsea Pt. 02'

Very hot but perfect has seven letters

Keep it up, I am looking forward to the next chapter, I hope I do not have to wait very long and really hope it is more than 1 page

So good but oh so short. Can't wait for the next installment. five stars.

DON'T STOP

You stopped just as it was getting good!

Brilliant, ended on a nice tease but please continue soon, very soon.

Your writing is wonderful, please don't stop

I'm only guessing, but you've probably received a solid 70/30 split between praise with no thought of your story's future and praise sans new ideas for Bi-sexual fun. The story is wonderful.

The path of these characters is finite but the duration of their time on the Literotica stage can be long or short. Please make them live long and prosper. ;}

Chelsea should contemplate but not move actively toward divorcing her husband. Too many stories show a minister as one or another of the hapless myopically focused faithful Bible beater or deviant man wrapped in a cape of piety. An example of life imitating art is occurring in the courts of Las Vegas now. Minister accused of raping and coercing the girls/youth of his ministry. We shall see how this plays out.

With some consideration and blending there is another person who is chosen for this life too. A family man who learns to balance home with responsibility to their flock. Husband and wife devotion has been established in your work so a future of pleasantly unaware minister can be developed. She goes to functions with him as often as she does not.

Put a hairy bush on a future character like a gas-and-sip check out girl who smokes pot to stave off boredom while watching the action of people stopping to fill the tank at her job.

Love it just like it would happen right now, not fast but a nice slow build up to what both want now.

I honestly don't want to sound demanding, but it was getting so good and you cut it off. I'm just gonna sulk until I get part 3!

What an erotic story so far. Please keep going, it has so many possibilities. But take it slow and seductive as you have been.

The promising start is blossoming into a great story - not too fast and well written

This was so sensuous and erotic I can't begin to express all the emotions and excitement I felt. Beth in California

Imagine a cat clutching a high branch with its front paws, that's me hanging on til part 3 so that I can drop into the loveliness of this story once again. Great job Leigh

14 comments in what? 4 years! You actually have a tough fan community!

Thank you for taking me on your journey... very real and relatable. So looking to reading the rest of your journey.

A lovely continuation - beautifully sensual and erotic! And, although I'm not religious myself, I like the way you melt away any notion of sensual sex and religion being incompatible. I am eager to go on and discover how the lesson beginneth!

Goodness gracious, you certainly know how to bring about crescendo seductive power… geez that was lovely build of emotion, anxiety and desire.