All Comments on 'Look at Me'

by Otazel

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writedoctorwritedoctorover 13 years ago
Nicely done!

Beautiful story within a story, great style with the right combination of sex and romance. Loved the characters and felt like I was there.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
OMG!

This is the story I have been waiting for someone to write! Beautiful!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
one of the best

Great story! More of this please, does Adam join in with the girls? We need more...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

good storie turned me on. I play with my self everyday and would let anybody watch if they wanted to. I let my husband watch all the time.He gets his cock out an rubs it all over my face while I finger my self.he tells me what a fuckin slut i am and he lets his friend watch.love it.keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Made me wanna cum

I started to play with myself while reading and imagining the roles....Good story

DessertmanDessertmanalmost 2 years ago

A good story, possibilities for at least one more episode.

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