All Comments on 'Looking for Miss Right Pt. 01'

Lucky guy!

5

Very good story and good reading will look forward to part 2. Thanks.

I got a little confused at the start where you mentioned his previous marriage then breaking off an engagement without actually saying he was engaged after his initial divorce. Otherwise, interesting story so far. 5*

So, he bought a house 2 months before he got engaged and 1 month before he broke up? Does that mean he broke up with someone before he asked her to marry him?

Do people really say "something on my stomach"?

Excellent Story — looking forward to reading more!!!

Nice development of Jonah. Tonya and Monica are both two-dimensional, but Chelsea I could come to know and love. Annoying confusion on your part of "lie" versus "lay." Still worthy of a 5-star rating.

This writer has his MCs as mansluts with multiple female relationships yet the mansluts are too much of weak wimpy to say no