All Comments on 'Looking for Trouble Ch. 01'

Very nice start! I like the build up and their interaction. The characters are interesting and I like the way you have them getting closer. Let them explore and love each other. Please continue and thanks for your time and imagination.

Chapter 2 now, please and thank you!

And a most energetic start to another fine work from you, sir!

Dammit!

Coitus (nearly) Interrupted! Dy Dad!

C'mon, Chapter 2 .........,

And boy you sure do not fight with soft gloves - straight to the action but loaded with emotion and fun. If only dad knew what he stepped into...

Regardless, a fine fine comeback worthy of a 5* but burdened with high expectations!

Totally erotic and teasingly well-written.

Great story.

Can't wait for what happens next.

You totally earned five stars on this one.

to see this. What a cliffhanger but what a great segue into them performing oral on each other, almost starting to unite and possibly getting caught by dad. Tempting and definitely a bit mischievous but certainly tasty. Well done.

Very good ☺️