All Comments on 'Looking for Trouble Ch. 04'
by CarlusMagnus
- 4 Comments
Anonymousover 4 years agoGreat story. I like the characters and the story line. I wonder who will be first to say "I love you". It has to happen with all the kissing and holding. Their love will surface and it won't be denied. They will have to work out the times they can be together and will eventually have to move out to be together. I look forward to seeing how you work this out. Thanks for your time and imagination.
Comentarista82over 4 years agolove how they blend together and I'm glad he really took her over that chair. She teased him hard and wanted to be taken hard. It was so fitting.
NO way they don't fall in love with each other after bonding this much. I echo the other poster's question of "who will say 'I love you'" first? :)
mick1510744 months agoLooks.like you have loaded Checkhov's Gun by opening the blind. Does it get fired by the Widder?
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