All Comments on 'Looking for Trouble Ch. 05'

Glad to see them end up together and in love, and even more glad to see you omit the nasty fallout with the parents. All in all it was a very fun story, a bit more fast paced than your usual ones, but delivered everything I expected of you and more. A more deserving 5* couldn't be given. Hope to read some more from you in a bit less than two years :)

Sweet.

on how you tossed them out without dwelling on it and addressing it in limited retrospect.

Some may say its formulaic to have had them fall in love, but they couldn't fuck like that and not bond. I'm glad you implied some struggle but that they made it. Certainly this last chapter seemed their hottest coupling.

A great little story that deserves a sequel.

The only thing that really bothers me is how you started them off with anal and then abandoned it. Not even a touch or lick to the butt after that. When my wife and I started practicing anal, it became a big part of our routine just about every time we were together. Sometimes it was just anal, and sometimes it was vag, but that desire never, ever disappeared...

Very romantic 😍

Very romantic 😍

Bang....

see my comment on previous part.