All Comments on 'Loopholes Ch. 03'

This is the best series I have ever read. I hope you turn it into 30 chapters! Keep them coming!!! Thank you!

I enjoy all of ZZ's work, especially the buttsex, but this one felt like he ate a thesaurus and barfed it all out on the pages! I got a little tired of all the suplaritive descriptions of everything. But it won't keep me from reading all of his wonderfully lubricated prose and explicitly turgid submissions!

about twice as long as needed. The quality of the read goes down for me when there's a lot extra verbiage. Just get the twins into the action and see what develops

A Lit Writer doesn’t add that detail unless “Voluptuous Aunt Jackie” is going to get fucked in this story. Here’s my guess, Jackie and her brother used to have butt sex, probably at the cabin. They used the same rationalizations that butt sex isn’t really sex, so it’s not really Incest either. The girls mother has figured out her daughters are getting fucked regularly in the ass. She’s not upset, because all the girls are happy. But she is curious. She wants to try anal too. But her husband won’t do it! He won’t give her what she needs, and that has caused marital tensions. It’s not because he’s a prude, but because he stupidly promised his sister, Jackie, that hers would be the only ass he ever drills. Again, he rationalizes that Anal isn’t “sex”, so it’s not Incest or Cheating. Somehow, Nick will ends up fucking Jackie, Mom (maybe even Minister/Dad—that would at least be a surprise), and all of them will end up fucking with the girls. At some point, I hope somebody takes a cock in their pussy. Reading about Nick’s “truncheon” stretching another asshole is getting monotonous.

How very thoughtful or GrantLeeStone to outline the rest of this story. What name does he/she submit stories under. Now, the word BESPECTACLED is way over used in this tale, along with other repetitive descriptions. IMHO

Wow! The best story I ever ready in this category!

I loved how you could describe the same thing, in different words, over and over again. How I wish I could give it more than 5 stars.

I am waiting for more Chapters .. Also Get the twins more active ..

I got really tired of being reminded that Tessa was the pastor's eldest daughter. Once, perhaps twice, per chapter is all that is needed.

When do we get to read more of this story?

Any more coming? I enjoy all your work. Thanks for the effort.

Love this series. Been well over a year since this installment. Would love to see how it goes when the twins join Tessa and Nick in the cabin. And will we ever find out the importance of the promise ring being missing?

You're god of story telling 🙏🏼

Does the author plan on writing a new chapter? This story is amazing!

The lack of a further chapter is very disappointing. 5 stars nonetheless.

A few too many adjectives and adverbs used in describing the scenes, but it does make the story really hot. Overall a great job.