All Comments on 'Loosening Up Bk. 05 Ch. 05-09'

Steve keeps telling the reader that yet that seems to be the whole reason for the Circle’s existence. Reminds me of a hippie commune in the 60’s. Still cool and peaks the imagination. You just have to read around all of the non-related stuff.

You danced around Sheri not having much experience and being an ice queen. Was she a virgin, in which case she didn't experience the hymen tearing/pain associated. Even if a virgin, one can still acquire an STD. No test was done or mentioned. Just pointing out story anomalies.

Love your stories, from this an other nom de plumes.