All Comments on 'LOrd of VEgas Ch. 13'

sorry to see it end :(

Dear Mr. Stevens,

You have a good imagination and have put together an interesting and amusing tale, for which I thank you. You do, however, need to send your editor back to school. The grammatical errors in the text were appalling and it is an editor's job to ensure that such mistakes are corrected before publication. This is not a 'job application' as I have enough editing work to keep me busy!

Soryy Mr. or Miss Luvtaread but you must try harder. Your author deserves better from you.

[29.06.23]

Excellente series!

Great character development, conflict where needed, excellent resolution.

11/10!!!!!

A truly excellent tale that exuded every emotion. Your characters were a fun and diverse group which only enhances a story. I would have liked to have seen the 11 Gods that Lloyd mentioned, just to see what they thought of the entire situation including his resolution.