All Comments on 'Loren Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Just Amazing

A creative idea masterfully executed. Hope to be able to see another of your sagas soon. Thank you for this one.

whiteasianlvrwhiteasianlvrabout 10 years ago
An Incredibly Great Story

Your is a wonderful story with a surprising end full of characters and well-thought out character development. You show the natural progress of men wanting men for sex and then realizing that gratuitous sex is no great reward when love is far more desirable. Kudos and my thanks!!!!

JoyStick56JoyStick56about 10 years ago
Wonderful story

Entire story is wonderful and well written. A few errors, but nothing serious or enough to take away from the beauty.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Promising but disappointing

As paradoxical as it may sound, I feel both happy and disappointed by this story. It started off as a mystery, proceeded to be a fuck fest and concluded as a happily-ever-after story. You turned what could've been a beautiful, well crafted story into another walk-into-the-sunset. A great plot, a great twist but a weak end. Nevertheless, I raise my glass to your effort. You go, mon ami !

erotikpassionserotikpassionsover 9 years ago
Good

Am a romantic who doesn't support orgies. I only love this story because it's well written and at least the main characters finally end up together and are in love with each other. Few mistakes but still a wonderful story.

gayswallowergayswalloweralmost 8 years ago
wonderful

I love this story. Congrats.

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