All Comments on 'Lori a Fresh Start and a New Love'

Another epic story from someone who consistently produces epic stories. I am in awe. Randi.

Fantastic! But that's something I'm beginning to expect from a writer like yourself.

15 pages? Jesus, get a job.

As expected, another great story

I enjoyed this a lot. Thanks!

Just to echo the good comments. Like Randi I am in awe

Anonymous: Is 15 pages too much to comprehend? Oh, by the way, sign your name before making shitty comments!

15 epic pages. Tremendous. More please.

Great story, thank you. I hope you don't get too sick of the spineless anonymous comments.

Wow, that was amazing! The whole thing just worked, and it was a joy, all 15 pages. Thank you just falls short.

Wow enjoyed didn’t not the threesome angle but you made it work

So we'll done. Really enjoy your voice as a storyteller. As for anonymous who can't handle 15 pages, READ SOMEONE ELSE. I love your long stories. Please don't stop.

Thank you for sharing your work and gifts.

Just so very fucking amazing! I didn’t need sex to get drawn in, lol. I’m not sure I liked how it ended, to much of a romantic one on one girl I guess, but my fucking god you know how to write in a way that I need to skip appointments to get to the end. I love the way your write, you’re truly talented and please keep them coming. I can’t wait for your next great story. <3

Thank you. An awful lot to like.

Just spent the day reading this, had so much else to do but couldn't stop, really good story. Loved the NZ life you portray so well. Thank you that you share such a talent and it's free even to us cowards who don't give a name.

Brilliant as usual . You really do set a high bar for others to jump. Enjoyed every page, if only it was a novel that I could have on my shelf. xxx

Just another heart-breakingly great story from a superb author. I love the way you seamlessly blend country life in NZ with the chaos of the music industry. 15 pages was not too long; if anything, another couple of pages would have been great as it seemed to end somewhat abruptly. Loved it

I loved the story. Sometimes you just want a wham bam thank you ma'am type of story and other times I want a story with great characters and a romantic story line. This was one of those stories. It was great. Look forward to your next one.

Great story. I enjoyed it. Sure, it was long, but you kept me interested in the characters and story the whole way.

Another great story with several twists..

well done

I’m a Kiwi, so I really relate to the locations, yes I’ve been to Piopio, but what I really like about Cagivagurl and his stories is the way the characters are developed, the emotions, when I’m reading your stories, I’m involved, I get emotional with the ups and downs of the stories and the characters. You are one of, if not the best author on this site. I so look forward to your stories, and the longer the better. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Masterpiece ….. you are so extraordinary talented, writing such enchanting brilliant tales ….. this tale was like sitting in the front row, feeling one to one the physical and emotional from the actors, getting involved like its family affairs ….. and the geographic details ( i love to use google maps and follow your roads and the described places) "……. Thank you for sharing your talent and bringing me a wonderful time reading your tales

Ten hearts a s usually 💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝🎸🎸🎸🎸🎸🎸🎸🎸🎸🎸

That was a roller coaster! Well done. ❤️❤️❤️

Wickedly sweet!

This is not comment more like a hint or suggestion

This masterpiece is laying so many plots to us readers, at the end, so you cagivagurl could write thousands of pages to go on with ….. this wonderful project in pio pio with the kids or the fighting this marty exec a…h….e and how he is being crashing or the blooming new star Tina with the new manager Alex or the follow ups from the band in aussie and uk …… sorry for this input and im not stalking, just beimg impressed with your skillls and love it to much

Namaste

A captivating story around a rich ensemble of believable/knowable characters — the good, the bad and the enigmatic. The music/band setting is perfect and well detailed; and sexually charged at right place/time. The entire piece felt real with a near perfect ending. Almost wish we could revisit Lori, Tab, Tina and Alex in a year or two - probably not something on your mind, but loved your main characters. Regarding length — don’t get the compliant; can always “bookmark” not to mention for me a page turner. Thanks for creating/sharing.

A captivating story around a rich ensemble of believable/knowable characters — the good, the bad and the enigmatic. The music/band setting is perfect and well detailed; and sexually charged at right place/time. The entire piece felt real with a near perfect ending. Almost wish we could revisit Lori, Tab, Tina and Alex in a year or two - probably not something on your mind, but loved your main characters. Regarding length — don’t get the compliant; can always “bookmark” not to mention for me a page turner. Thanks for creating/sharing.

Another roller coaster being chased by a fire breathing dragon and every other assorted villain and ne'er do well in the southern hemisphere, blimey!!!

Sweet as. Your emotion and character development continually drag me into your characters and stories.

Hooked

Loved the story 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟. But you mixed up the names in wrong spot wrong person. Otherwise great characters in the story flowed.

Wonderfully wild romp.

Thank you for writing

Five stars. I was thoroughly absorbed by this story, and couldn't put it down. Once Lori slept with Tina I was so anxious about how it was going to end. I didn't think it likely to end in a threesome, but otherwise there was going to be some serious tragedy. The ending didn't quite fill me with joy in the way that I had hoped for. I think that may be because I lost sympathy for Lori. I didn't feel her hurt when she found out about Tab and Tina, and her actions came across as mean. From early in the story poor ingenue Tina was the character that I had been cheering for, but the last two paragraphs cast her as the inferior partner in the triad.

Excellent. And in regard to length, I have no problem with it at all. I especially appreciate getting the whole thing at once, and then reading it at my leisure. Which in this case had me reading the last 7 or so in one sitting. I prefer this to just getting a chapter once every week or two, b because then I lose the thread. That doesn't wpork as well for me. But great story.

As is usual simply to good to stop reading!

I love 5he characters and feeling their emotions.

5hank you

Good story but the lead characters were pretty weak people, and I don’t mean because of drugs. Tina is weak and submissive, tho some of that certainly is youth, some is simply her. No surprise she was drifting to Alex at the end. She’s the type who may never learn.

Lori hopefully learned enough about herself, life and relationships to keep from relapsing or totally messing up her life, but Marilyn certainly still swam in her mind. Points big time for getting where she had tho. By itself, a huge huge deal to get clean from H.

Tab…parts of her personality didn’t quite add up, but I will say that anyone who’s loved a junkie should show a lot more hesitation about letting them back in their life, and home, and heart. Second chances are one thing but use caution! And to make all those plans for Lori’s home, while sleeping there, and sleeping with Tina, with Lori gone? That took balls. Lori had limited right to jealousy over Tina, but every right to be super pissed there. Where the hell was Tabs head? Oh, wait, stuck between the legs of a baby gay….

So a lot of the drama comes down to people wanting young pussy. Not worth it!

Wanted to love this, but the end just killed it for me.

Tab, Lori and Tina ending up in a triad is great, but not when it starts out of infidelity and deception. Tina is still trying to figure out what she wants, and she's bouncing from partner to partner. I'd have been a lot more hesitant to jump into a triad like that. The idea that Tab and Tina would just say "it's all okay we can all just be together" to put off Lori's rage is just insulting and she shouldn't have jumped at it.

The second big issue is Tab's "surprise". I'm sorry but you don't just start committing someone else's property to something and putting plans into motion without their knowledge and consent, no matter how altruistic it is. Come up with the idea, make a plan, do research, estimate some costs...all of that is fine, but involving the local government and starting to make contracts with people? Absolutely not. Lori should not have just caved on that either.

I think this is your best story yet. Unlike some of your prior stories, the main character isn’t continually self-sabotaging (well, only once, but in the service of dramatic tension). I loved the detailed view into the band and music business (that was a path not taken for me, and I can sense your deep understanding).

The sex was natural and HOT, and the throuple was the solution I hoped for. A fantastic piece of erotica.

I have found myself dipping back into this author's writing just to see if my reaction is different. Nope. Writing is decent but the world and world view she describes is puerile and artificial. Just can't get past that.

Started as a good story then drifted into ridiculousness.

I love this story...

You are a damn good writer, and this one may be the best story, so far...

Greetings from Denmark

Belinda

Total snoozer. Made it 4 pages and skipped to the end. The whole three-way thing is a ridiculous copout.

Good story ,i like it.Thanks

Great story, but it seems to need a part 2.

All the angst getting the three of them together and Alex comes along and it’s oh well maybe we’re a couple only again? Seems like there needs to be a part 2.

Great story.

Great story, could use a part 2. Thank you.

Thought it was very good, UNTIL the 3 way love part, shame, bcos the emotion & story telling was very well written, but after how fast it changed, and forgave, i stopped paying attention.

Good read with plot and character development.

More awesome work keep it up