All Comments on 'Lori and Daddy Ch. 08'

I have read every story you've written and given each one a five. Sometimes two fives. Once I even voted three times for the same story. You never disappoint.

My only criticism is your use of the word defiantly when you should be using definitely. I know I'm being picky, but after all, I do read and vote for your stories.

This is for whomever wrote the "LOVE YOUR STORIES!!" comment.

I hope you read this as you left no way of contacting you, but I just wanted to say a BIG THANK YOU for your feedback, and the pointing out of my spelling mistakes. I never realised i did it and will proof read more closely from now on.

I hope you continue to enjoy my stories and please feel free to contact me personally. Thanks again, Whinston

Wonderful!