All Comments on 'Lori and Jonah: A Seduction Ch. 02'

by indianfire

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ILienBagbyILienBagbyalmost 14 years ago
Thanks

for a fine second chapter. Definitely a five.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

awhh :)

i love this story,

i want Jonah and Lori to be together!!

please :)

keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Please continue writing!

I saw that it was a 2 part series....that means it's ended?? NOOOO...can you possibly give it an ending...please???

indianfireindianfirealmost 14 years agoAuthor
the series

i promise it isn't over. i do plan on writing more, finding time is my only issue. the third chapter of this story is next on my list, :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Keep going on :)

i love this story! i love the messed up relationship lori and jonah are sharing! and how he keeps wanting her but knows it cant be! please keep going on, i would love to read more about this steamy couple ;)

wildbrushfirewildbrushfirealmost 14 years ago
Yes!

Please write more! I love it! They seem so sexy together and you really brought out her love obsession with him. Of course, if he is as tasty as you describe in your story I would be obsessed with him too...lol!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Love it!!

One of my favs!! This is my third time reading it!! :):):)

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