by LoriisaDirtyGirl
Can't wait to find out wha the surprise is!! Great job!
The torture of waiting is almost unbearable! Please good sir, post the next chapter!
First class writing! Well done! Great love story! PLEASE, don't follow some of your writing peers and hurt or kill Lori in the next chapter! There are enough cruel writers on this site...
So brilliant. I follow this now with anticipation. Please post the next chapter :)