by Lumiere_Amie
That was a beautifully written story. I quite thoroughly enjoyed it. A few spelling errors but not many. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Really enjoyable story, which was well written with few errors. The sex/romance balance was excellent, and the correct mix of present and past tenses was unusually good and made for comfortable reading.
Very nice romantic story, a bit tedious at times to read through the same storyline details from three or more points of view, but overall, very enjoyable.
First time I have rated a story. It was a wonderful story. Well written with an ocasional error. On a couple occasions of occasions the story dragged
Overall a great story. Maybe it's based on a real story.
Robert