All Comments on 'Losing My Balance Ch. 05'

That was hot lol

Wow! I didn't expect anybody to comment so soon after I posted that. Missed you all too and thanks for checking up with my stories. I've actually just finished the latest chapter and just need to edit it and etc. So it'll probably be up by next week!

Thank you, thank you, thank you! I'll go back and again read all the chapters in preparation for the next one. Can't wait!

I just finished rereading all five chapters and i'm ready for the next one. Yay. Thank you HeartnSole for informing us about the next installment. I will be waiting patiently for it to be posted.

You've made my week with this update HnS! Welcome back, we've missed you. Super stoked to read more of Irri and Bee's love story.

Haven't checked this site in a bit - but I sure am HAPPY I checked today. YAYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!! You know how I feel about you and your work!!! Happy to have you back in the game sis!!!!!! Looking forward to the new chapter.😘

I'm almost done with the next chapter, should be a couple more weeks... I realize I kinda went MIA for quite a while and didn't respond back, I had a severe case of writer's block. This is why I say I'm an amateur haha, but I'm working on it!

Thanks for keeping the comments rolling as well as the emails about it, I really appreciate it from everyone ^.^ You guys are the best.

*sings* 'baby come back!' lol Happy New Year! I hope all is well with you 🙏 you are one of my favorite writers and I'll be here whenever you're ready 💙

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Can we get an update hns? Please :)

I love love love this story please post the next installment

We your loyal subjects have been waiting so patiently

But I'm going crazy here lol

I literally check for the next chapter everyday several times a day

Pleaseee don't make us wait sooo long

Can we have the next part please.

I've reread this story at least 6 times waiting for the next installment. Please hurry! I'm losing it here lol

keep calm.........HnS is ALWAYS ALWAYS well worth the wait!

thats all! 😎

I could re-read this 100x plus. Looking forward to what that sweet mind of yours comes up with next.

Thanks for the bedtime stories,

Grey

I couldn't have said it better myself. Go look at some of the comments posted after the last chapter of Blurred Lines by Victoria Wright. Demanding is an understatement! I concur with H-hug and I say to you what I said to Victoria. You have a life to live and you have gifted us with your talent for free. I appreciate it greatly! Continue the story on your own time when, and if, it feels right. There is absolutely no reason to feel any pressure to do this at all. I thank you very much for sharing this engrossing story with us and should I see another chapter, I, most certainly, will read it and enjoy it. I've read many stories on this site over the years, but I must say that you, HeartnSole, are one of my favorite authors. Again, thank you very much and I wish you the best in all you do.

Greg

Thanks for saying that Heisenhug! I really appreciate it, I wasn't sure exactly how to respond to the anon except to say if you don't want to wait to read, no one is forcing you to keep following along >.<

Dear anonymous, the author NOT your bitch. Show some gratitude and understanding, they aren't obligated to write squat for us so we should be nice to those who share their work with us for free. Regards, reader who appreciates writers.

Enough of those excuses please we want the next chapter asap!!!

Thank you for even more lovely comments and sorry it's been taking so long! I've been pretty busy/facing a bit of writer's block, so what I can say about the timeline is maybe check only every few weeks >.< I'll let you all know when I'm closer to being finished!

Literally checking up every week!!!! Time frame? :)

This is so good and I cannot wait for what follows!

I love love LOVE this story!!! So excited for the next chapter! Out of the hundreds of stories I've read on this site, this is probably my absolute favorite. Hopefully the next chapter happens soon :) :) :)

We'll be waiting anxiously lol. Thanks for always keeping us posted.

Thank you everybody for your amazing comments and support! (I was a bit unsure about this chapter, but not anymore;) All of those comments have been making my day every time I see them, wish I could thank everybody individually :)

Started working on the next chapter, slowly but surely! I don't have a timeline yet exactly, but I'll let you all know closer to the date.

When is the next??? :)

Sip each second, drink it slowly... Watch the hours melt awaaaayyyyyy!

Hiya... Good job woman! Awaiting chapter 6....

I literally danced in my living room when I saw this chapter go up. I was worried it may never come around. It didn't dissapoint and I can't wait to see the fireworks display. Great job :D

Fan-fckn-tastic!!! LMB5 is so hot and HnS is back in a major way. Going back to read the other four reminded me why I love this story so much and why HnS is one of my favorite authors. Well done HnS. Well done!

love the build up.. wish it was longer!!!

granted, im grateful for the two pages but lets

see if you can expand a little bit

Excellent! Nice inclusion of Nisha and Aries.

O.M.G. The sexual tension is so thick you can cut it with a knife! Love it and can't wait for the next installment !

There are quite a lot of poor to mediocre stories on this site. Fortunately there are also many good to excellent ones. You, H'n'S, I have just placed among the Excellent! The ongoing "Losing My Balance" has got the lot, all of the wide range of human drama that a reader could want. And (and this is most important) your characters are all very believable, very plausible. Loved your line "Adulting is hard work!" At my age I'm way past that but it was fun while it lasted. Obviously there is more story to come and very welcome it will be. Keep up the brilliant work, H'n'S, you are a talented lady.

this is by far the bast of all 5 chapters, letting Irri go after bee is great, when she finally realizes that bee is the one she wants, I still say having sex with your bff is not a good idea, it does change a friendship, and not for the better either

You're such an amazing author! I'm a sucker for a good love story and this story is jus perfect- I've loved every bit so far. Can't wait for the next one :)

PS. Great choice of song for the Lap dance - I had it playing while at work today and I couldn't stop smiling. Like an idiot :)

That's such a tease! Next chapter please! This is bothering me so much!

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG H&S, that was an amazing TEASE... the way you ended it... "im not worthy" even better than what i had anticipated... i can't stop grinning and squirming.. fyi i got marian hill on the background atm,.. imagining... Irri's dance of course :p

i love the way you explained each character's angst and worries, the insight you have given us that makes them act the way they do. i love how you build up the story. the "dance" before those two finally wrapped their heads and realized this is meant to be.

nisha and aire making a cameo... somehow those two fits in this story... great job. kudos to you, this one is worth the wait..

Yes!! Loved it!! Great chapter cant wait for the next chapter. Please dont take another 6 months!!

I went back and read from chapter 3, because there was a relatively large time gap between chapter 4 and current. So when I started to read this one, it was fresh on my mind.

I really enjoyed this chapter. The jump between POV is slightly maddening, because I need to shift my identification as well, but it gives a better coherency (is this the correct word in english?), their actions are more in-character and better explained when they explain themselves.

The sexual tension and the lap dance were highly erotic. I cant wait to see how you will write an actual sex scene between them. I tend to think it will be mind blowing.

Oh, and I adore the expression cunt-on.

fuck, fuck, fuck, I really hate you right now

Yes!

You are so good at this!!! Your writing style is so very fresh, sexy and contemporary and I am here for all of it - so please keep writing and honing your skills.

I can't even explain how elated I was with the Nisha and Arie update ❤️ and with them being friends with Bee and Irri - that was sooo fking smooth and makes so much sense👍🏾. And I loved the touch of vulnerability in the bathroom scene with Bee and her emotions and at the end of the chapter with Irri and her lack of eye contact!

But after that final sentence of the chapter by Bee, all I could think was - Lordt somebody is about to get the fucking of a lifetime right up in her own bed!!! (but pls send the friends home though - get them a cab or something but get them the hell out of there lol)

Ps (I'm going to be re-reading this tonight while listening to 'lips' - yum) 🙈

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So excited to read the rest of it 😄😄😄😄!

You did a great job on this piece 💜

I CAN'T with you lol I'm flipping my sht over here!! Aaaaah. That ending.. damn. Damn. Damn. 😛 This series drives me crazy, this chapter drives me crazy, YOU drive me crazy lol I had to put the story down several times, esp towards the end and curse you for being too good!! Real talk haha! You are such a wonderful writer and story teller, I truly hope you receive the recognition you deserve in your life right now. Thank you for bringing such animated, intense, fun reading experiences to me with each chapter lol it is much appreciated! Can't wait for the next one! 😊