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ThorlolThorlolover 1 year ago

Should this really be in romance? Didnt feel like a romance. Just two people who are divorced and have no qualms with cheating. I mean, Dave left his wife/fiancee with their newborn back at the house to cool down in the water but ended up fucking his ex-wife. Didnt leave me with any good feelings, just slight disgust to be honest. Should have been in loving wifes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Romance? Not! Sad! Innovative? No Just disgusting cheaters! 1/5

Probus888Probus888over 1 year ago

Well written and good use of Aussie dialog: going off like a frog in a fucking sock! Ha ha!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Romance? Hate to see you write something sordid.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I think it's romance, it's about the end though not the beginning.

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