by Lost Boy
You never disappoint. Thanks for sharing your talents, Randi.
A great read as always. And, glad that there are still more stories to read.
Another INCREDIBLE installment, Lost Boy!!
I anxiously await the next!
To yet another great story. Anxiously waiting for more.
Hope you have great health and may you walk in the Light.
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I have plans for his return. It is a bit off as other stories fill in crucial plot lines. Glad you are enjoying the series. Thanks!
I was hooked from the very beginning, this last part did confuse me just a little bit. I definitely look forward to another Adventure.
It is an enjoyable story. Please try to add to this soon. I have been waiting for over a year to see where it goes.
You know you have a trilogy here, and with some cleanup, it will be rated R. You have a winner on your hands, so finish this to a point, clean it up, maybe take mom out of it, for the moralists, add another lady of two and start looking for money to produce it.
XYZ
I love the tie ins to ur other stories. Iron rain I think? But very well done!!! Stories like these need to continue n I hope u do just that. Seems like a lot of readers would like more from this series n I'm no different. Hope u get back to it eventually. N thank u