All Comments on 'Lost and Found Ch. 01'

Where's the rest of it?

A+

Good start, I hope we don’t have to wait a long time to read more.

Great start looking forward to more :D

That's it? F you want people to read it, don't drag it out.

Not good to draw a story out like this. My recommendation is to have significant substance in each part. You've got me interested, but I have no idea when you will release part 2 and who knows if I will even see it.

"Lust and Found"?

Great start. I personally love slow build ups

Wrong category, no incest in this 1/2 a story, wait until you have a more complete story before submitting....

A bit disappointed, but a good start, with a cliffhanger worthy of finest episodic television.

5*

Tc

What the hell was this you get going like a run away train and then STOP just a 3 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good beginning, can't wait to read part 2. If there's no part 2 then everyone's negative comment is warranted. This reminds me of a similar story posted here nearly 20 years ago. That story started slow and got really hot quick! Good luck and we'll stay tuned!

You know you can group these so they're ready to navigate, right?