All Comments on 'Lost Ark Ch. 04'

Good read and belivably plot. Keep writing i look for you.

Great story but a bit confusing with the interchanging names of Kyle and Danton towards the end....a bit more checking required or have I missed something?

I'm glad that Kyle and Lissa understood their moral obligation to rescue clones designed for sexual pleasure. This was a fun series, with mystery, egotistical bad guys, just desserts, and sexual tension. Always a good mix. Five stars

My 2 cents

I enjoyed this story. I liked the characters and the story line. I gave all installments 5 stars. Thanks for your time and your imagination.

Well done, nicely rounded out for all. Who doesn't like a happy ending

"I took certain liberties..."

Hey, if it's good enough for Andy Weir, it's good enough here. Your last two stories, taken together, definitely hold their own with "The Martian." And they're a lot sexier!

Liked the stories but the jumping between Sloan and Lissa was annoying.

I'd like to see more set on this world of yours...

Thoroughly enjoyed this one as well, different story, good sex and made me smile - what else can you ask for?

Really good story and a good companion piece to “Lost Colony”, I thoroughly enjoyed it, I don’t mind liberties being taken with space flight details, as long as there’s at least something to sustain the believability. If I’ve got a gripe it’s the constant swapping between “Lissa” and “Sloane” along with “Kyle” and “Danton” I understand you were trying to distinguish between professional and personal, but it got a bit mixed up and difficult to follow. Many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz. 5⭐️

Came here after I discovered and read Lost Colony. I loved this story, also! I’ll definitely check out your other works.