All Comments on 'Lost at Sea Bk. 02 Ch. 01'

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kyotie913kyotie913over 5 years ago
Very enjoyable

Great story so far keep up the great writing

SleeperyJimSleeperyJimover 5 years ago
A new chapter - and all is right with the world

Once again you come up diamonds with this chapter. I'm very pleased to see it's the start of a new book, as that promises a whole lot more in the future. The story is coming together well, especially with Jack getting back into it, the sex continues to be more than pleasing, and the slow burn romance is quite enchanting.

Please find a way to get Janie back on board with them. A harem with a missing member feels broken.

And please - longer chapter next time?

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Lost at Sea is currently about 500k words, and well into the second book. If you're a fan of epic fantasy, pirates, mysteries, and the emotional complexities of polyamourous harem-ish relationship, this is the story for you. Each chapter averages 8k to 10k words. My release ...

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