All Comments on 'Lost at Sea Bk. 02 Ch. 02'

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kyotie913 over 5 years ago

Twist and questions

Your building in so many twist and question marks it hard to keep it all straight, But a great story all the same. 5 stars

Anonymousover 5 years ago

I can’t help but feel that Quinn is manipulating Jack, what the story behind will and jack? She obviously loves him like crazy, but why did she curse him and leave him to die? Will he ever forgive her? Ahh!! I need answers! Can’t wait for the next one!

Anonymousover 5 years ago

Throwing it out there

Great story, I bet that Jack found a genie, and made a badly phrased wish. Or the wishes have a monkey paw like effect.

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Lost at Sea is currently about 500k words, and well into the second book. If you're a fan of epic fantasy, pirates, mysteries, and the emotional complexities of polyamourous harem-ish relationship, this is the story for you. Each chapter averages 8k to 10k words. My release ...

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