by KingOfHalves
Oh this pause hurts. Can't wait for the next exciting chapter in this refined, ravishing, rollicking adventure.
The sign that a writer has pulled off a multi-POV story well is that, when a section ends, the reader is killed by the cliffhanger... And yet finds themselves engrossed in the continuation of the next point of view within the first few sentences.
You definitely have pulled that off, without question.
Now... It's just a matter of speeding up the trickle of story we receive. (But sadly, we live in a system that makes it very hard to survive off following your passions.)
This might be one of my favorite chapters yet - Quinn's wisdom, this hilarious menage a cinq between two tents, the further unspooling of Crane's secret and the dark underbelly of The Magistrate, Tonya learning about how gender and identity work - all a delight.