All Comments on 'Lost at Sea Bk. 02 Ch. 24'

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CarchariasCarchariasover 2 years ago

So Belita is going to lose all of her crew that were stabbed by the tentacles and are now feeling ill? She probably won't handle that well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wow! Intriguing and technical stuff, and the story keeps getting better. Very clever use of misunderstandings, e.g. viscous - vicious. I have no idea where the story will go, but can't wait to find out.

It may be obvious to Danica, but I haven't worked out the real reason or consequences of the breaking of Belita's pottery, but have a feeling it will be significant later.

Strand

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Lost at Sea is currently about 500k words, and well into the second book. If you're a fan of epic fantasy, pirates, mysteries, and the emotional complexities of polyamourous harem-ish relationship, this is the story for you. Each chapter averages 8k to 10k words. My release ...

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