All Comments on 'Lost Bloodlines Ch. 05'

That was a prologue? Wow. I am loving this story. Sone great twists and turens hete. Great work!

Wow. Didn't see that coming, can't wait for more

This is really good, I look forward to reading more, not sure what kind of feed back I can offer at this point sooo I will just say keep it up :D

I know adrenaline was pumping and all, but I feel like I would've tried pulling off a table leg to try chucking at Visrayth. Barriers are sometimes iffy on random bits of tossed material. Also, it seems like the fainting spells only come with new *supernatural* partners, but this is a hypothesis that I'm sure Dr Lima would agree needs to be tested (and I'm sure she'd volunteer as a human data point)

Glad to see a new chapter. I'm assuming that the armor's from the piece of Victoria's soul. Still hoping that Chilith (still calling her that, Charles+Lilith) starts getting more proactive in unlocking and mastering her powers.

Also, what would Chilith be able to do if she got a piece of Sam's soul? A succubus using divine magic? Also, I'm kind of expecting Victoria to convince Chilith to organize a massive orgy and go full pokemon master.

Oh damn you're introducing the fae! Now we are getting interesting. I just hope you don't go too big too fast as it were so that the story gradually builds. Absolutely loving everything so far!!

Awesome, I like to see legendary figures like Oberon and Titania making an appearance !

Just for the world building, it would be great to have an explanation of how they stayed hidden, especially for the last century with technology and all.

5 stars. Great work, and because Lilith is a succubus, the sex isn't just gratuitous. Not that Literotica readers have any business complaining about gratuitous sex.

I like to keep my comments simple, so thank you for the chapter ✨⭐

More please.

This is such a good read

I’ve never commented on any story before, and I would like to start it off here saying this is the most incredible read I’ve ever had. Please keep this series going

This is one of the best stories I've read here. It's absolutely amazing and please continue to write.

My oh my, how the turn tables! I'm not surprised Riley would be a domme, but I couldn't predict how -effortlessly- she brought Lilith to heel. I can only look back with wry dread how that first encounter would have played out if allowed its (super)natural progression. Once again, kudos for the cool-down—I'm not in the BDSM circle, but I've heard from those that are that smut stories often critically neglect the post-session wellness check.

This is fast becoming one of my favourite stories on the site, the sort of urban-fantasy epic I'd write myself if I could ever focus my imagination. The premise of a previously-hidden Magic World merging into modern reality coincidentally calls to mind the eRPG Lilith's Throne, but better developed and with a nuanced eye to the global dynamic. I think this is the first time I've come across a serial here that's devoted multiple chapters to a defined prologue—given what we've seen so far, I can only imagine where the 'main' story leads.

"Fuck Homeland Security, fuck the monsters, and fuck all these wizards."

If you'll permit me a Max0r moment: "I'm gonna build a new future, Chuck, one where we won't have to hide our fucking from anyone. And for that, I want you by my side: to build a world truly free from the consequences of our attractions, just like the Founding Fathers intended!"

This is some Genius writing work done here , capturing each individuals emotions. I love this series, pls continue this work and don't stop

I don't think I can say it any better than SirDigby already has, but suffice to say I came across this series last night and proceeded to read all available chapters in one sitting. I love the idea of hidden fantasy worlds in the vein of Eoin Colfer's Artemis Fowl. This is also the first of many stories I've read on this site that I've felt compelled to comment on, if that holds any weight. Seriously well written, please continue for as long as you are passionate for it - I'll be here for each installment.

Shit, came across the first chapter last night. The burned through them. This stuff is good.

Eight Seats? With the Seelie Court being one. So obviously the Unseelie as well... I would assume there is a celestial/(good religious) and a demonic/(bad religious) seat based on Sam, Victoria, Damien, and Lillith's existence, maybe some kind of Taoist inspired pair of seats to match Draco? No clue about the 7th and 8th seats though...

Fascinating!

Where or where are the other chapters, I can't wait to see what happens next.

I'm loving this story. very imaginative

Great!

Good lord I am bloody loving this story. Well done mate.

I was enjoying the story until Lilith got all subby for Riley. I just don't enjoy a sub MC at all.

Very good. I particularly enjoyed the sub scene. Hope to see more. Either way, very high-quality story.

Briliant realy held me. Looking forward to the following chapters. Thank you so much.