All Comments on 'Lost Colony Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Best Sci-fi/Fantasy story on Lit that I came by... I just don't enjoy much of the flashbacks, but its a needed nuassance I guess

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Brilliant turn of the tables.

This story is amazingly brilliant and I am liking Alain Sparr's turning of the tables on his pursuers. Looking forward to the next episode.

Share the Love

Devir Ginator.

MimiRayMimiRayabout 3 years ago

I can't get enough of this tale. Still can't figure out why Calista has it in for him, but I'm sure that time will come.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

The story works for me. I am suffering from the 4-week wait, but it is worth it. Certainly hard to stop once it arrives, now we wait for chapter 10. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I am enthralled with this story. I don’t care a lot for the graphic sex scenes, but the sci-fi aspect will keep me hooked until the end. Do keep going, steamy bits and all, until all is revealed. I am hoping Calista is not the “baddie” but time will tell. Cheers, Roger

RandoniusRandoniusover 2 years ago

This is quality writing (plus hot steamy action ). Intricate plot. Every chapter has earned 5 stars from me so far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Really great last line/dialogue. Enjoying the story. 5/5

PurplefizzPurplefizzabout 1 year ago

One of the best sci-fi stories I’ve read here on Lit, great science fictions first requirement is the world building, the second is wonderful, fleshed out characters, you’ve done this in spades while still running a plotline that’s keeping us hooked, 5/5 just great writing!

pk2curiouspk2curiousabout 1 year ago

Anonymous is reading fiction on Literotica and he doesn't like graphic sex scenes . WTF ? Naive and hypocritical .

Duide just go away .

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