All Comments on 'Lost Empire Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
wow part two is as good as part one. epic.

brilliant read thanks for the shear.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
This great

An awesome story. Hope there are many more chapters, plus many, many more of stories in the future. You have genuine talent. Please keep writing.

rightbankrightbankalmost 7 years ago
Drama and creativity

I just hope a cliff hanger doesn't end each chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Yes

Getting better and better

Paps

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I'm binge reading the whole series from the beginning. Still loving it.

onecuriousreaderonecuriousreaderabout 2 months ago

something wholesome about a foolish character, making foolish plans, and seeing those foolish plans, blow up in a foolish character's face. time for some character growth.

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Am a clerk here in Florida. I started writing almost three years ago again. I am dabbling in almost all genres. I hope I can bring a little enjoyment to those that have never read me. Also am an old Dom out of the life style for years. Am open to private chat with almost anyon...

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