All Comments on 'Lost Empire Ch. 15'

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CHET1220 almost 7 years ago

YOU REALLY KNOW HOW TO TELL A GREAT STORY, KEEP IT GOING...

arrowglass almost 7 years ago

I agree!

I wait with "bated breath" for each chapter. Awesome yarn!!!!

Anonymousover 6 years ago

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OK, I'm fine with the amazing Tech, zipping back and forth across the galaxy, fighting xeno fiends, but you don't have any kind of gravity buffer shock damping system...not even helmets. Seriously? He can fall and hit his head to the point of serious concussion. So he can disarm insidiously complicated bombs but doesn't have the common sense to sit in a chair, strapped in, and be protected...really? The emperor is an idiot.

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