by Pars001
the hardest part about finding a great series is discovering it when there are already 52 chapters, then having to wait for the 53rd!!!
Keep them coming!!!
This is the best series on this whole site. Please keep them coming. What a fantastic storyline.
Can you be a little more consistent with your posting as they seam to be all over the PLACE and what is the red ''H'' for , and try for three pages next time
You show great imagination.
Just proof read before issuing, too many silly little errors detract from the great tale.
Such a wonderful series, it is such a pleasure to read it.
Keep up the wonderful work.
This is a truly fantastic story and one I'm sure you are proud of as you should be. I have read many very good stories on this site and by far this is the best.
Who cares that there many be a few mistakes it only adds to the story not take away from it. I for one don't care I'm just enjoying a great read. Those that criticize obviously have nothing better to do with there time. Perhaps a few more pages to a chapter would be nice but that is your choice and yours alone.
I am so much looking forward to the next chapter.
Kindest Regards
Aren't you just full of plots twists... LOL
Thoroughly enjoying what you're created. Delightful, authentic characters; rich, engaging story line; unique, complex world; this has it all. A professional editorial massage, and this would be a best sellers' list, blockbuster Sci Fi series.
As good as anything I've read in 50+ years of Sci Fi/Fan reading.
GeoD