All Comments on 'Lost Empire Ch. 53'

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falizurefalizureover 6 years ago

God yes, i can never stop reading this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
The hardest part...

the hardest part about finding a great series is discovering it when there are already 52 chapters, then having to wait for the 53rd!!!

Keep them coming!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wow

This is the best series on this whole site. Please keep them coming. What a fantastic storyline.

AlunCarregTheWelshmanAlunCarregTheWelshmanover 6 years ago
can you be a little more ;

Can you be a little more consistent with your posting as they seam to be all over the PLACE and what is the red ''H'' for , and try for three pages next time

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 6 years ago
Absolutely love the story

You show great imagination.

Just proof read before issuing, too many silly little errors detract from the great tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
A Joy

Such a wonderful series, it is such a pleasure to read it.

Keep up the wonderful work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Pars

Any news on when the next chapter will be available?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Critic's be dammed

This is a truly fantastic story and one I'm sure you are proud of as you should be. I have read many very good stories on this site and by far this is the best.

Who cares that there many be a few mistakes it only adds to the story not take away from it. I for one don't care I'm just enjoying a great read. Those that criticize obviously have nothing better to do with there time. Perhaps a few more pages to a chapter would be nice but that is your choice and yours alone.

I am so much looking forward to the next chapter.

Kindest Regards

Wildwood55Wildwood55almost 2 years ago

Aren't you just full of plots twists... LOL

Thoroughly enjoying what you're created. Delightful, authentic characters; rich, engaging story line; unique, complex world; this has it all. A professional editorial massage, and this would be a best sellers' list, blockbuster Sci Fi series.

As good as anything I've read in 50+ years of Sci Fi/Fan reading.

GeoD

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