by Pars001
A very nice chapter, but I do hate the loss of Onai. Is there any chance the Empire Tech Wizzards can pull another rabbit out of the hat.
The ending of this segment felt very awkward to me, almost as though a conversation was cut in half. I know Pars like to add short chapters to advance his storylines but it just felt like an incomplete thought. I will miss having Onai around, as I liked her dynamic personality. Thanks again for keeping Lost Empire going.
OK look I really enjoyed stories. But it’s time to start making them longer chapters. It’s getting pretty old reading for 10 minutes. And then have to wait a month or two for the next episode.It’s not like you have anything else available.