All Comments on 'Lost Empire Ch. 66'

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FieroGT1988FieroGT1988about 5 years ago
Well done.

A very nice chapter, but I do hate the loss of Onai. Is there any chance the Empire Tech Wizzards can pull another rabbit out of the hat.

arrowglassarrowglassabout 5 years ago
I agree with Fiero...........

Especially about Onai!

ArcTalyxArcTalyxabout 5 years ago
A bit awkward

The ending of this segment felt very awkward to me, almost as though a conversation was cut in half. I know Pars like to add short chapters to advance his storylines but it just felt like an incomplete thought. I will miss having Onai around, as I liked her dynamic personality. Thanks again for keeping Lost Empire going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Really?

OK look I really enjoyed stories. But it’s time to start making them longer chapters. It’s getting pretty old reading for 10 minutes. And then have to wait a month or two for the next episode.It’s not like you have anything else available.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Killing Onai was a mistake. From now on, I actively hate this story.

LwcbyLwcbyover 3 years ago

WTF, killing onei, one star, wish I could give it a .0001 star!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Hated that you killed her. Nit liking this one! Best I can give is a 2.

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