All Comments on 'Lost Empire Ch. 74'

The best story, Excellent writing..

Waiting for the next chapter...

but, it is great story, well written and executed.

Thank you very much for it!

Well worth the wait.Great story!!

shore1nut

thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!!!!

i will be looking for the next chapter in this and sam

I have waded through this series of stories in the apparently fore lorn hope that the plot holes would be filled in later chapters. I’ve got to the last one posted and still nothing.

you could use some editing and proof reading. It is annoying when the Duke becomes a Baron and William becomes Trent. Inconsistencies like those and other minor errors detract from the story.

Overall it is one of the better stories here.

I struggle with the flip flop from realism to the absurdity of poorly choreographed martial arts movies & over the top animation. No one can move another physical body 50 fucking feet with a single blow.

It's just stupid.

this story ranks with things like battlefield earth and a hymn before battle. it deserves to be published as a complete book or even a series of books. i know i would buy them

And just what military use did Bee serve in the now concluded battle? Is Derrick in on the match making scheme with Lucie? She seems bipolar in her reactions, still treating Bee as an honored guest rather than a POW. If the Admiral wants to know the specifics of the bonding ritual, he should simply ask her. Anything like a bondage ritual?? As I said before, "Prisoner, assume the position..." Fleet didn't decimate their opponents, they annihilated- wiped out- 4 columns, 40% of the enemy forces, whereas their allies accounted for only 50% of the remaining 6 columns. Total: 70% of starting forces and 2 of 3 hive spheres. Note, if Derrick concedes that the 'crime' occurred outside his jurisdiction, why can't Bee realize that she 'ain't in Kansas anymore'? Is he so spineless that he can't make his orders obeyed- even by a POW? Sheesh...

Anon56

So wait. Bee was only good for breeding stock but is suddenly an asset during battles? They weren’t allowed to be involved with anything other than breeding but suddenly were valuable during ship based warfare?

And how is this empire still standing? I can understand abiding the rules for jimisons screw up as it happened in their territory BUT they’re just letting Bee life by her own rules because why? She’s in the imperial territory, her rules and laws SHOULDNT apply here. Lucie aiding her makes it treason. So yea get rid of Lucie and stop this nonsense of “oh it’s a woman I have no hope of stopping her” cliche.

So Onai was raised from the dead? And a human body can be hit and fly 50 feet? That’s called death. Humans fighting so fast they become invisible? This series started out with promise but you seem to have degenerated into martial arts absurdities and ‘honor’? I’m sick of the word honor.

What happened to finding the remaining EIGs and reestablishing galactic rule?

I saw your new chapter and happen to have lots of free time so I read some of the older episodes. If they don’t get better, I will stop.