All Comments on 'Lost Empire Ch. 78'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

As usual, I like all of your stories. You would get higher scores if you sought the service of a proof reader and had assistance with your pronouns and articles.

lrdhawkwindlrdhawkwindalmost 3 years ago

Glad to see you return it's been too long

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This is a subplot you haven't pursued before. The Duke really is a treacherous little shit, isn't he?

Brittanyduran86Brittanyduran86almost 3 years ago

More please, I am surprised that you haven't reached chapter 250 yet and science fiction and fantasy would be a better fit to this story more likely that people would read it.

TulipfuzzTulipfuzzalmost 3 years ago

Glad you're back!!

Taz903Taz903almost 3 years ago

Great story. You have a fantastic talent. Eager for the next chapter.

MbC56MbC56about 1 year ago

I'm glad you're back! Although I realize this is a non erotic story, It's just been way too long since the emperor and Empress were married for them to have not consummated their marriage come on!

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Am a clerk here in Florida. I started writing almost three years ago again. I am dabbling in almost all genres. I hope I can bring a little enjoyment to those that have never read me. Also am an old Dom out of the life style for years. Am open to private chat with almost anyon...

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