All Comments on 'Lost Empire Ch. 79'

These pieces are so short and so spread out, i have lost track of the story.

I think it is good, but barely remember who is who and why.

character building. takes time but it is a necessary part of any story. Well written as always. a few typos but not excessive. Thank you for sharing with us again. 5 stars.

Another great chapter I have re-read the entire saga again as I had forgotten parts of the story thanks again for your efforts.

It now seems to be going nowhere and is wandering aimlessly.

Great chapter just wish we could get more than a cold pages at a time. Feels like I just start to get vested in the story line again n then it's done again. But great work b thanks for they enjoyment

Another great read, just wish it was longer. Keep them coming.

It is a GREAT story and I can not wate to read what happens next.

Almost every man and some of the women are hot heads. They lose their temper at the slightest provocation or perceived slight. Some of them are like 3 year olds, throwing temper tantrums, when they don't get their way.

I agree. Almost every main character seems to have severe emotional and psychological issues. Anger. Screaming at friends and family. Assault. People's authority is dismissed. So called, female lovers and family hit their partners. Battle hardened soldiers cower to the abusive and verbally assaulting women. Detracts heavily from the story.

Unrealistic for people trained to a high level in martial arts, or advancing to high leadership levels would so little self control. Physical & mental abuse is the domain of weak willed individuals.

The over reaction, hair trigger tempers and physical/mental abuse has been a constant common theme since the early chapters. The chracters have become one dimensional and predictable.

This has led to what could have been an amazing story to becoming merely a way to pass time until better works are updated.

I'm about to catch up with the most current chapter, and will likely not add this to my watch list for updates. I've ralized there just aren't any characters I really care about.

It's a shame. There is/was so much potential here. But writers as well as characters must grow & develop to make a successful work. Neither have done so, here. Too bad; it is an imaginative story line with so much protential.

It’s sad to see what started as such a great premise devolved into some weird anime with every character having borderline personality disorder and extreme narcissistic personality disorder. It’s almost as if the original writer stopped years ago and a 5 year old took over their account (both in grammar and in thought process)