All Comments on 'Lost Empire Ch. 83'

SO GREAT TO SEE A NEW INSTALLMENT. THANK YOU. no stars yet as O I have not read it yet. again Thank You.

Another great chapter absolutely love this story thanks again

An another amazing chapter. Thank You for all you do for us fans.

5 start.

Thanks for your time creativity and imagination and bringing us fans another great chapter 5 stars and two thumbs up

Awesome!Thankyou!!!!!!!!!!

NICE!! It's good to have you back. 5 stars as always! This is the best damned storyline on this whole site!

Looking forward to the next. Thank you.

I have enjoyed this so much. Please tell me there is another chapter soon.

Hey, Pars001. Not to nag, but it's February 2023. When's the next installment coming?

I am greatly enjoying your stories. I read your post about your family. Things like this drain a person so. I wish you well

I like the storyline very much but there are lots of typos or sentences that don't run smoothly.

Ergo: you need an editor. Urgently.

No I'm not volunteering.

I do t understand how after years of writing you don’t have an editor. Honestly this story has gotten so convoluted with so many absurd plot lines. Suddenly hartwell is madly in love with Bee? It’s starting to read like a high school romance novel with how much backstabbing and stuff there is. Mary was obsessed with creating a wife for the emperor to have heirs but they haven’t even had sex yet. Tons kf ships regening for weeks. I’m surprised this empire hasn’t collapsed already

Many of your characters, especially Lucie, need a stooge slap. What a whining baby. Why are they all flawed?

Editing would be nice. Since you put episodes so infrequently, it seems finding an editor should be possible. Not like you are in a hurry. Yes, I know life intrudes but still.