by Pars001
I thought that you had given up on this series. Welcome back. Excellent chapter, had to think about some of the characters back story to understand what was happening.
Excellent chapter so glad to see that you haven’t abandoned this story, or just gone MIA , as some of the great authors do . Sometimes life gets in the road, and they just fail to update their status, or just abandon the story for no apparent reason that the reader can see , thinking that they just gave up when really they have a plausible reason for a extended delay, or stopping altogether . So I’m really glad to see that you’re back and continuing on with the story. thank you so very much for your time, effort and imagination in continuing this great tale for us 👍👍 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Like you do with most of your stories here and on other websites, I gave up on you.
Its too bad as you spin a fine yarn. But you have also been writing this story for over 6 years now and despite the number of chapters it really isn't as long as people would think it is or should be because most chapters are only about or slightly over 1 page in length after you cut out the 1/4 page of "review".
I really wish you would have committed yourself to actually writing and finishing this story in a reasonable amount of time. Other authors who have used this same method of writing a story for years upon years have died without finishing their stories. A recent example is Starfleet Carl over at storiesonline. Luckily, his son was able to step in and finish the story albeit a bit rushed, to appease his long-time readers.
Thank you for the story!
Kindly do not stop, please, as the story' getting momentum.
Please restart after the newyear is over, as we need to Duke brought to his knees, a lot more brainboxes brought to completion etc.
Thanx for sharing your talent!
Thank you for continuing this story. So sorry to read about the loss of your brother.