All Comments on 'Lost Empire Ch. 88'

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WhitewaterbumWhitewaterbum4 months ago

Finally you’re back! Hope you give us readers the next chapters in a timely manner.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

That was a long brake?

I was thinking, you gave up on the story!

PS: I like it, I am happy that you are going on.

JazHazJazHaz4 months ago

Chapters need to be longer. Two pages doesnt cut it.

SlofredSlofred4 months ago

Worth the wait. Thank you for the new installment. 5 stars again. Hope all is well this holiday season.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

The man is back! Well done as always. 5 big stars!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

It took about a week but I've read the story from the beginning. While the plot is good, you could use an editor to make the story flow better.

HelgamiteHelgamite3 months ago

Just finish the entire series! Got a follow and a 5* from me. Easily one of the best non erotic I've read in a while!

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