by Member389
Nice. Ending seems a bit abrupt. Is there more? That I want more tells you how much I enjoyed it.
Very good story, please continue. A lot of directions this story can take.. good job!! 5+++ stars!!
Aw, a lovely May - September romance.
I'm a romantic & enjoyed older men, so I hope you develop a longer storyline for them.
Very good. My suggestion is to leave it as it is. Sweet, tender, and full of promise.
I had just reread one of your wonderful stories when I discovered this latest posting. You are one fine writer and this was excellent. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. By the way, I once worked for a man who had traveled widely in Europe and was of the opinion that the most beautiful women came from Poland.
For the she is too worldly to end it here. She will find a way to get together again.
This story is very sweet and gentle. I really do enjoy your writing. Thanks