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I hear the alarm in her voice.
"David, w--why do you have your gun out? P--p-please put it away. Please, David!"
"Oh, don't worry. I'm all out of the notion of KILLING ALL OF YOU! You can thank Spike for that."
"Ki—kil--killing all of us? Oh, God! David, I'm so s-sorry."
Lisa falls into deep air-sucking sobs, and I can't take it anymore. I raise my head and look at her broken, tear-smeared beautiful face as her shoulders jerk with each pitiful sob.
The pain overwhelms me as I feel the loss of everything I hold dear, knowing I will never again feel the indescribable peace that is merely a state of being when you become one with the love of your life, your soulmate, and never question it.
The last tenuous threads of my soul tear away, and I feel no more pain as all my senses go into overdrive, like a microphone humming on the edge of a feedback loop.
I reach for the coffee table, grab my gun, and everything goes into slow motion as Lisa's eyes go wide with alarm.
All my struggling to understand has been replaced with an overwhelming sense of clarity. I know what's wrong with me as I put the cold barrel under my chin.
I can't live without her.
I see Lisa desperately moving toward me in a bizarre, dream-like, extreme slow motion.
I close my eyes as she screams,"NOOOOOO! DAA...
...I reach out to close our laptop, my hand trembling, my heart ripped out and shattered, every nerve ending in my body on fire with the rage that is overcoming my complete despair...
One final indulgence.
Please conjure-up Rod Serling's iconic voice to bring it home.
"David could not absolve himself of guilt over Lisa's infidelity and move on. He is now lost and destined to spend eternity reliving those last hellish hours of his life over and over again. Somewhere in,
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- COMMENTS
MoustacheSmuggler8 months agoI liked this story. Obviously it was awful in terms of what happened, but I do sometimes appreciate a dark, soul-destroying story. Literary masochism, I get it. Very, VERY well written, too.
Thank you for writing. Please write more. You are very fucking good at it.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoIf David was a real man he would have taken his pistol and drove to the motel. Next, he would have gone to his wife's room. Then a simple knock on the door and a "I'm here for the gangbang!", gains David entry. At this point it's a pistol in the faces of everyone and an order to throw five cellphones into the bathroom. Now David can give his ultimatum! One at a time, each man can leave the room with theircar keys. But they have to leave naked and they have to make a choice. Lay on the floor and take a boot heel to the balls, crushing them, or take a .45 round to the junk. After that, they can leave.
The ending of this was stupid. David had no reason for guilt but plenty of reasons to bust nuts put a boot up Lisa's crack! hubby77 seems to take joy in writing about weak and ineffective husbands. I suppose he feels better about himself if he can make other men less manly and confident. 1☆
MarkTwineabout 1 year agoJust another LW story about a weak assed pathetic “man”. No wonder she had to cheat on the sorry bastard. Who would want to fuck a weak bitch like him. He deserved to die.
mattenwabout 1 year agoSorry, but I don't see anything convincing in your story. On the contrary. It's idiotic and cowardly to kill yourself for a reason like that. I call it the "revenge of the little man" who doesn't know what else to do. He then kills himself hoping she feels guilty. What a pathetic little worm!
