All Comments on 'Lost in Texas Ch. 01'

Long, but definitly worth the read. Love your sense of humor and visuals.

Excellent character depiction, wonderfully hot sex scenes, and the little frigger even has a plot!! One of the best Lesbian stories I have ever read!!

I thought it was very good and well done, congratulations on a very good story.

This is definetly one of my favorite lesbian stories. It was not a quick little tryst, it was a developed, interesting and incredibly sexy story. Hope to see more from this one. Keep up the good work.

Great story and wonderful character development. Hope there will be more chapters. Didn't mind the lenght at all, its welcome change.

... from reading so much on screen! (When is Lit gonna make that "printable version" link, eh?) Very nice work, EA. ~Imp

It's great to be able to really get into a story. Good

distinct characters. Looking forward to the next one.

I love the series. Thanks for the too short story. More! more! more!

It sure was worth it!! Great job and can't wait to read the other chapters...now, I must go take a shower!! WHEW!

~Honey

I had always passed your stories without reading becuz i thought it was a typical three-girls-get-lost-then-they-get-off-each-other kinda thing, until i gave it a shot today and i must say i was blown off. Your characters are typical types of extreme characters and yet the way you build the story was very interesting with nice humours and unexpected scenes here and there. Now i'm gonna read the rest of the chapters. Keep it up!

Very well written, as always. I especially liked the foursome. Beautifully done.

...At your name choices of the three older women. I'm surprised none of your other comments seemed to have picked up on it. I truly enjoyed this story and look forward to reading the next chapters.

That was really good. It had just the right mix of funny moments and erotism. 5 stars!

You know, I've been putting off reading this. And now I'm sorry I put it off! I laughed with (and at) them, cried with them, came with them ... oh my god! 10 stars!!!

i love to read part 2 email me when its online

I have to say, categorically, that not only is this series one of the best erotic stories I have ever read, but one of the best stories I have ever read period! Not to sound too mushy but thank you so much for sharing this story with us. You rounded it off so well that I doubt there will be a sequel but you have left me wanting so much more. Thank you.

FANTASTIC story from EA :) Well done, Hun. Ditto every good thing said. The story was great; the sex was sensual, wild, believable and hot; the writing and presentation was nice (as the editing was good). Thank you so much, you definetely bring up the average in Lit. Lynn

Preposterous and completely enjoyable. Great fun!

...I don't care for the anal stuff but that's just me (different strokes...) Right, that's out of the way so I can say what a brilliant story this is. It's got the lot: interesting characters, good build-up, humour, drama and elements of wisdom. So now for Chapter 2.

Good story, my only critique would be to minimize the amount of blushing Laurie does. She's blushing when she has her tongue up Janes cunt while being banged by heather with a double dildo. I would say they're way past the point of being shy. 😉

Glad I'm not the only one that caught the names.

5 Stars

Attaching my list of Errata as usual

caught her fair share of stairs, whistles and catcalls.

She was cut off by face-full of young woman.

we need to get to get our own business done

Alice stuck used her other hand to pull the end of the shirt

traced the muscled along the small of her back.

Michelle move at what might best be considered

their lips connected a gain

I've every seen!"

that sticking up for you nanny was a

"I've so rarely get such a lovely

made a cowgirl out our young friend,

Michelle of again as well.

I just doesn't happen."

Freddie's body all to well.

she didn't want to know t hem

swear you trying to seduce me

smelled or touch was about sex.

She thought that it was be painful and icky,

Five stars is not enough ..... For me its the main attraction to your stories around the sex events you celebrate ........ Awesome artwork