All Comments on 'Lost in Texas Ch. 03'

Makes me smile.

I read ALL THOSE WORDS! It only took me a week, too. And now I notice there's another 8 Lit page follow-up. Sheesh! Good thing it's well worth the effort. ~Imp

All dom\sub stuff gets me. I cant even read many of the other stories on this site that have that as thier main focus.

Not to say that it detracts from this Totally HOT story

Seems silly but i'll be sad when i've finished reading this.

I have to say, I didn't have Alice pegged as a submissive! Although looking back, the signs are all there. And it does somehow seem right for her, and Liz seems to care for her. It's not like that loveless D/s stuff that I can't even read anymore. This story is brilliantly written with just the right amount of humor thrown in. Hell, I still crack up when I think about the oil in the windshield fluid! And the map flying out the window. ~ L

First the mild criticism. I noticed a couple of times in Chapter 2 and quite a number of times in the early parts of this chapter that you mixed up the names of your characters (eg Heather was sitting at the bar...[and] Heather was sitting beside her...). I know from long personal experience that when a story is going well, then the temptation is just to go at it hell-for-leather. Sometimes, though, it doesn't hurt to slow down a bit and go back over what you've been writing to pick up on typos like this.

So, the story is getting more interesting as it progresses and I'm certainly getting to like the major characters more and more. And there are a few good one-liners which made me laugh. I'm not sure I care for the dom/sub stuff but you are weaving it into what promises to be a genuine love between Alice and Liz. Anyway, you've left me keen to read the next couple of chapters

Those creative writings makes me smile and let me reading all of your stories

You've had other things ‘tying' up your time, and it was ‘bound' to happen that you'd want to spend some time with Liz, seeing as she's ‘captured' your interest," Heather said with a smile.

Tying bound captued ..... Perfect bound in one sentence or

You have something soft to sit one Yeah why? Slap Running away

See it in my imagination the two running laughing through the corridors

Perfect ...... Thank you and for letting Jane being part of the lost in texas girls

Very good story and readable. Not much into dom/sub but this is so caring and well written that it is enjoyable. Looking forward to finishing the rest of this story, thanks