All Comments on 'Lost Luggage'

by Tomsparty

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Sweet!

I'd have rate it 100% if they had a 3-way with a man.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Great story

Once the genie has been let out of the bottle...

It seems haveing released his hidden Beatrice, he probably can't go back to being the man of the house.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Wow

He's a lucky girl.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Good Part One

I don't see this as their last vacation as girls. I think he enjoyed being kissed and wants more. I'm not sure who will wear what at the wedding, or if they have two ceremonies. I think their house/apartment will need a lot of closet space. Keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
continue it

" I put his arms round his neck and pressed into me. I felt his hard cock push into me. He tried to kiss me and I struggled to escape but he held me firm. Next thing I know, I feel my hot tongue inside his mouth and the rough unshaven chin around my mouth. I open my lips wide and let him explore, loving the feel of his dominance as he squeezes the wind out of me and prods me with his hard cock. I feel taken and defenceless. After the song I thanked him for the dance but fled the club only to bump into Clare necking the waiter in a corridor. "

I liked it very much pls continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
sloppy, difficult read

Poor spelling and bad grammar hide what might be a good story.

Is it Clare or Claire? Pick a spelling and stick with it. This writer couldn't conjugate a verb if his life depended on it and picks the wrong tense frequently. Writer should learn things like the difference between your and you're; how to use where, were and wear.

NeedYouNeedYouabout 16 years ago
His panties are to tight cutting off the blood

to his little cuck. Maybe he should just bend over!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
lucky girl

sure wish i was as lucky as him tofind someone wanting a bride

BiskitBiskitabout 15 years ago
sweet delights

Ok, I really liked the story. I jerked off twice but I had to stab myself in the eye because of all the misspelled words, poor grammer and the bungulated conjugated verbs. I understand how difficult it is to find an editor to help but at least get the name of the girlfriend right. I gave it a 100% but only on story line.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Beatrice

story great, spelling poor, but as said before, it would be great if they had a couple of men involved when Beatrice could lose her cherry, especially if they both preferred him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
What a Wonderful Story!

I liked Beatrice accepting the role, enjoying the feeling of femininity, and looking beautiful. Well done. It's a wonderful story!

BrendaNWBrendaNWover 9 years ago
loved it

I would definitely stay as the lovely wife..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
sexy bride to be

Im so excited, been married for many years to a wonderful lady, I too like to be dressed up and out in public but my bride doesnt appreciate it...she would never allow me to dress up on holiday even though i lost my bag once.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
So Impressed

Well done. I only wish my wife would allow me the same luxuries. I really loved this story and my panties are wet just thinking about what I just read..😍😍😍😍

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 8 years ago
This was just...

lovely. You kept the tension rising and falling so well. The piece was fairly introspective, so the narration was fitting. I'm a big fan of dialogue, so I hope you work more into what I hope will be a wonderful following chapter.

Thanks for sharing your talent and imagination.

Tootight1Tootight1over 8 years ago
loved the story

the story ends, without an ending. when will they actually talk and express themselves, their wants and desires, fears and fantasies? a good story, needs a good ending, or at least a middle.

DianeRedfernDianeRedfernover 6 years ago
Magnificent story

Made me so wet, sweetie! I adored it. I hope there's more/

xoxo, Di

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Too slow

This story is too slow

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
The previous commentator is slow

A nice slow build up makes this a delicious story for those looking for more than a rub and tug.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
My wife is lawyer in hot pencils skirt .. i want to her skirts

Actully , i start to tell my wife about how i love here skirts and dresses an tights

And how i loved to try them

Step by step

I tryed some and take some pictures of me wearing them

And i send it to her phone on whatsapp

She is very lovely , she lughed alote but never say no

And i send much more

Of photo of me in here pencil skirts and the heavenlly blue blouse of her

With heels and stocking

More and more

And for reall im crossdresser from my childhood

She becoming to be ok... my husbend like to try my pencil skirts

Then she gave me many of her lovely pencil skirts and many blouses and stoacking

And gave me access to all of lengiry and dress and clothes

Now im allowed to have romantic sex with her while im wearing cute pencil skirt and proffissiinal blouses and all outfits of sexy lawyer as her

I wish ican go public insexy lawyer like her

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Excellent!

I think all guys should have a Clare in their lives. I know I would.

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