by ChickLicks
I hope there’s more to follow, that was very well written. As period pieces go it was comprehensive and believable.
Tess (UK)
I cannot wait for more! It's been a while since a new story has gotten my attention like this! Well done!
Oh please don't make this a stand alone. You took so much time and care building these characters with such vivid details of their environment. I'm begging for more!
I'm gonna say this now. This. Needs. To. Be. A. Book. I am a huge fan of all your stories, but I must say this has been the best one yet. Ugh, please for the love of all that is holy, please please please continue this. I am utterly in love. I greatly love all your other works, I can see myself rereading this for the next weeks. I cannot stress this enough, this was bloody amazing. Please continue!
~ Fable
Whoa!! Haha that was goooood! You are a very good writer!! I was so intrigued and could wait to read more and more and more! I hope you continue this was really hot!
this was the hottest one and my absolute favorite out of all your amazing stories. i have reread this so many times now, please continue the story. i am so excited to read more.
Excellent characterization and don't we love sassy strong female leads. Absolutely beautiful esp. the drowning part haha. Very very well written.
The last page drifted towards cliche literotica stories and then I realized it was nonconsent category, but apart form forcing her just coz she slapped him, everything else is beautifully written.
Love your stories.
WOW! Your prose is outstanding. I am hooked if all your stories are this good. You really feel what each charactor is thinking & going through. Keep up the good work.